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November 03, 2007

Yesternight...hikhik:)

Last night, as was updating my blog, a sudden brown out invaded my work! gggrr... I almost have to say ungrateful words but I resisted myself. But anyways, I'll just repeat what I have written, because yesterday was another memorable day to me.

I was fixing my bookshelf when I saw my composition notebook, and it reminded me of my poems that I made when I was in Highschool. The first time I made poems was during my sophy years. We had a circle which I named as: "ARE YOU GONNA BE A POET?" circle. This is a group of aspiring poets in our classroom which is composed of four members:

1. IMARI SANTOS a.k.a "Butterfly"

-of course! I was the one who established this! Here's the very first poem I made. I entitled it as "On the Seashore"

(Note: This may sound "baduy". i was only 14 years old when I made this! I don't know how I made this...hehehe... made for only less than an hour)

Beside the seashore, I was walking along,

I saw you sitting, lonely and alone.

I was picking sea shells,

While you were watching the sea breeze ("pinapanuod na pala ngayon ang sea breeze? heheh:)

Then I saw you crying, filled with loneliness in your eyes.

I went towards you to offer my hanky,

Then I saw you smile and happy

We took a long walk on the beach,

Together with the setting of the sun.

We sat together beside the shore

Then we looked on the far horizons

Having sweet talks and sweet moments,

Buliding beautiful sand castles.

The night came; the stars appeared on the sky

The sandcastles were destroyed by the waves

Then I realized that on that shorten time,

I knew that i had fallen for you.

2. NORISZA RAMIREZ a.k.a "Pentate Sappho"

-she's one of my best friends. Actually, she was the very first one to write poems and I just followed her:)

- this is my most favorite poem that she made... check it out...

"My Crush" by Pentate Sappho

When I saw your smile flashed,

You've become my greatest crush

But I know you can't give my love back,

So all i can do is to cry and sob.

I kept my feelings for you,

And all that time i knew you were mine

When my friend ("ako yun!) told me to awake,

My poor and broken heart ached.

Life must go on, so i moved on

Trying to forget you but I can't

So I didn't fight myself

And admit that 'til now you're on my mind.

After a long, long time,

When it has come to me to prove my love,

My heart cannot make it to survive

But I didn't let myself drawn into my feelings and stupidity.

My friend ("ako ulit yun!") told me it's not the end,

And that I must know how to defend,

All thje decisions and beliefs I made,

And to live my life to fullest.

3. KHEMBERLY PERALTA a.k.a "Mnemosynerato"

- a very lovely, smart and talented girl who's at first, did not make love poems ("pero nung first time nainlove nung third year kami, as in super dupperr:")

-Here's a poem for our moms that Mnymosyne made:

"Mom" by Mnemosynerato

From being a child,

You helped me developed into a young lady.

Slowly in bloom,

Form being so quiet

You filled me with hope to face the whole world,

Outside my room.

When I'm in danger, you're the one who protected me.

When I'm in darkness, you carried the light that will guide me.

When I'm in confusion, you're the one giving me serenity.

And when I am sad, you're the one who makes me happy.

So thank you is the word for people like you.

Cause you gave ne the love, which is really true.

And everytime I feel the challenges that come through,

I know I'll stand them all,

'Coz there will always be you.

4. JARED PARAGAS a.k.a "Narciso"

- the only thorn among the roses...heheh...

-here is the sample of Jared's Obra which became a talk in our classroom, for we didn't know whom he's referring to.

"I Love You Friend!" by Narciso

You've been a pal who's always around,

Helping me when I'm in need

Sharing mem'ries with me,

So thank you, and for you, I love you.

My love for you grows,

My love for you gets stronger

'Coz my love for you is more than afriend to me,

And my love for you is greater than my life would be.

I couldn't believe I'm in love with you,

You're just a friend, and that is all

But as days go by, as time passes through,

I knew that I'm already dreaming of you.

Everytime I close my eyes, I see your face,

Wherever I go, I can feel your soul,

Whenever I hear beautiful music, I can hear your voice,

And everything I will do is for you.

Life may be incomplete, without you in my sight,

Days may be boring, without you in  my life.

If only you're mine, then I should be happy

If only I could say how I feel, then I'm not worried.

But what a coward will do?

Always scared to say "i love you"

The only thing I can do is to wait for the right time,

Time when I'm ready,

Ready to speak and accept your answer...

That's it! Yes! We are the future writers! hahaha... did you enjoy? those were composed by Sophy students of St.Jo, S.Y (I forgot the yr.) After finishing a poem, we exchange works and discuss about our interpretations.

I miss you guys!

                            

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